Making connections

I am learning to make connections between the book and my own experiences to say what I think.

I am good at making connections. I like sharing my experiences. I have a lot to share so I think I could do it for every book!

Adding details

I am learning to add some detail to my writing.

Walle-E the Whale

One day in the big blue sea there was a whale called Wall-E. He had no friends at all. But he was happy. He had no distractions and it was nice and calm. But one day he found one little fish. He was more happy. He went to talk to her. She said that they could be friends.

I like adding detail to my story. Sometimes I forget to but then I remember to look at my plan and then it is easy again.