I am learning to add some detail to my writing.
Walle-E the Whale
One
day in the big blue sea there was a whale called Wall-E. He had no friends at
all. But he was happy. He had no distractions and it was nice and calm. But one
day he found one little fish. He was more happy. He went to talk to her. She
said that they could be friends.
I like adding detail to my story. Sometimes I forget to but then I remember to look at my plan and then it is easy again.
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